Thursday, November 17, 2011

poetry

Today we began a poetry unit.
 Think that poetry is a poem and it has rhythm. I dislike poetry because you have to rhythm.
We read Love That Dog by Sharon Creech
Pause#1: He does not want them to know.
Pause#2: Kids like the short ones some people may not thank it might not be a poem. Some kids might like to write poems and others may not.
Pause#3: kids do not like some poems and he does not understand poems that the teacher reads.
Pause#4: He likes street music he likes yellow paper and tree poems. He wants to tell the person who wrote it that is a poem
Pause#5: He wants to use someone’s other people’s words.
Pause#6: He can’t forget anything .He felt bad for his dog.
End: He is going crazy because he came to see him.

Jake got his inspiration from Walter Dean Myers things that happened around him and reading other poems and his every day life.

Here is my attempt to write a poem:
 Apples Apples
I love you are so juicy
 When I chew
you are so juicy.

Friday, November 11, 2011

SCARY STORY

We wrote scary story.Read my scary story below.

It was a dark, stormy night when Miss Storms went to find her dads watch and she got trapped. When her friends tucker and allies got a call saying “I need help because I got trapped and you have to find the key” said Miss Storms. When they got there the way to get to miss storms is you have to go though 4 doors on the left. Then the one on the right number 132 on the right. They got lost and we saw a ghost and goblin .They finally found the key and got out.

Thursday, November 10, 2011

RIVER HIPPO

WE WROTE EXPOSITORY ESSAYS IN CLASS. PLEASE READ ABOUT RIVER HIPPOS


The river  hippo’s   scientific  name is  hippopotamus  amusibus   its weight   is   5655-3200g   and   its light   is   300-540cm   its   color   is light   gray   with   a   little   brown.